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11-19-2006, 04:13 AM

Fredd

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Very good tale, KoD. Easy to read, decent plot. Could stretch out the details in it into a fine short story.

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11-23-2006, 12:09 AM

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What is wrong with dialogue?

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11-23-2006, 12:24 AM

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I read all of it so far... keep it up!

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IC - Frost Giant - Unguilded - level 10
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