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Old 07-28-2010, 02:29 AM
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Post My first Improvised Story

hey guys, last friday at 8:30pm some people stuck around to listen to a story I made up on the spot for each line, I posted it here because some people only heard the end and were interested. I think it was horrible however it has been copy+pasted from the chat box.


You shout: Thisss isss the ssstory of Hero of Vesssimasss
You [story] shout: SSSo one day In Vesssimasss, there wasss a naga named Bassshablasssha
You [story] shout: It would be Bassshablasssha'sss firssst day of hydra training
You [story] shout: Asss Bassshablasssha wasss training, sssomeone by the name of Bob sssaid, I will train you to become a warrior of the nagaraga clan
You [story] shout: Bassshablasssha, ssstunned sssaid "Where do we ssstart?". Bob had told Bassshablasssha that they would go deep in the wildernessss of the Vesssimasss
You [story] shout: Asss they headed out in the wildernessss, Bassshablasssha sssaw a whimpering Watery eye
You [story] shout: Bob told Bassshablasssha not to go near it, but bassshablasssha had attacked it and killed it with hisss ssspear
You [story] shout: Asss the Water Eye gave out a sssmall yelp, many Water Eye'sss came and ssstarted to attack Bassshablasssha
You [story] shout: Bob ran in the fight and killed all of the Watery Eyesss, and Bassshablasssha only had a few water burnsss
You [story] shout: Asss Bob took hisss ssspear out of the lassst Watery eye, he told bassshablasssha if he did sssuch a thing ever again that he would kill Bassshablasssha himssself
You [story] shout: Bassshablasssha apologized to Bob, and they continued in the wildernessss
You [ooc] shout: how isss the ssstory ssso far
You [story] shout: Asss they went deeper in the wildernessss, they sssaw many creaturesss that were interesssting and quite intimidating, bob had been ssstruck by another naga from another clan, the rodanok clan
You [story] shout: even though bob wasss in huge pain, he got hisss ssspear and plunged it into the opossssing naga'sss heart
You shout: Asss bassshablasssha ran to bob, bob gave bassshablasssha hisss ssspear, which asss sssoon asss bassshablasssha touched it, had a luminousss glow
You [story] shout: When bob died, bassshablasssha wasss too weak to carry bob, ssso he left him there, but told the newsss back to the town, and they were angry and horrified, asss bob wasss their 2nd ssstrongessst warrior
aeroth [auction] shouts: Lightweight elven cloak of agility +10 anyone?
You [story] shout: Bassshablasssha wasss then drafted to fight againssst the oppsssing clan, which we will call the aeroth clan
You [story] shout: Bassshablasssha ssstarted to train for thisss war, and went in the wildernessss with hisss new ssspear to fight off sssome creaturesss
You [story] shout: Tim, who wasss the ssstrongessst warrior in the nagaraga clan took bassshablasssha under hisss wing, and told him that he would help him become a great warrior
You [story] shout: Tim ssshowed bassshablasssha how to ssstab, throw hisss ssspear, ussse hisss ssshield asss a weapon, and how to fend off againssst arrowsss and ssspearsss
You [story] shout: After a few weeksss of hard training, Tim had told bassshablasssha to come to the naga cassstle
You [story] shout: Bassshablasssha had ssshown outssstanding preformance in training, and wasss brought in to become a royal defender for the king + queen
You [story] shout: The king told bassshablasssha that the sssilence of the two clansss will ssstop sssoon, and that the war will begin sssoon
archaism [auction] shouts: Buying ring of fire/cold resist, amulet of free action.
You [story] shout: SSSuddenly, sssoldersss from the enemy clan came to the nagaraga town and ssstarted invading
You [story] shout: asss the huge war ssstarted to begin, Tim had ssshown proof of why he wasss the greatessst fighter, cutting and ssstabbing head after head after head
You [story] shout: Tim however wasss worried when he sssaw that thessse were not royal sssoldiersss of the enemy clan, but civilian sssoldiersss
You [story] shout: Becaussse thessse sssoldiersss had actually done good amountsss of damage to the city with untrained sssoldiersss
You [story] shout: *they were untrained
You [story] shout: and the amount of royal sssoldiersss left in the nagaraga clan wasss dwindling, 3 companiesss of royal guardsss from the enemy clan ssstarted to come
You [story] shout: Asss bassshablasssha sssaw the sssoldiersss, he ssstarted to ssslither backwardsss
You [story] shout: Tim had caught him, and told him that they mussst fight to the death
You [story] shout: Bassshablasssha ssstared to sssee that hisss ssspear'sss luminousss glow wasss never more intenssse
You [story] shout: he ssstarted to put himssself together and get ready for the battle
You [story] shout: Tim, Bassshablasssha and the remaining nagaraga royal guardsss ssstarted to charge the huge army of the opposssing clan
You [story] shout: And had ssstarted ssstabbing, piercing and impaling many of the enemy royal guardsss
You [story] shout: however, no one noticed the bowmen behind the opossssing force, and asss they fired their arrowsss, one ssstruck Tim in the tail
You [story] shout: Asss tim ripped the arrow from hisss tail, he continued to fight along with hisss comeradesss, but the nagaraga clan wasss finding themssselvesss falling ssstepsss away every minute
aeroth shouts: And also, that quest is probably too hard for you to do at your current level.
You [story] shout: And asss they found themssselvesss right near the cassstle, tim had found the opposssing clan had 1 flaw, half of the sssoldersss did not have ssshieldsss
You [story] shout: asss the nagaraga clan ssstarted to take their arrowsss from their quiversss, they fire arrow after arrow at the oppsssing clan, they ssstarted to pusssh the enemy back
You [story] shout: Asss one of the ssscoutsss of the enemy clan ran back to their king, they sssaid that they were losssing the raid, becaussse the main force that had all of the defensssive equipment had died, and that the 2nd force only had ssspearsss
You shout: the king ordered that all of the tamed creaturesss be releasssed to attack the town owned by the nagaraga clan
You [story] shout: asss the enemy sssoldiersss retreaded, bassshablasssha had a battlecry and wasss ssso happy that they had won the battle
You [story] shout: But tim thought that thisss wasss odd, becaussse the remaining force could ssstill have done major damage to the city, told bassshablasssha and the remaining royal army to be ready for any sssurprisssesss
You [story] shout: asss bassshablaha had laughed at that idea, he turned around to sssee a large amount of liquid ssshock dragonsss coming
You [story] shout: Thessse dragonsss were one of the mossst dangerousss thingsss in the whole vesssimasss, and the only perssson that had ever killed them wasss Tim, and had lossst an eye killing one, let alone 15 or 20.
You [story] shout: At thisss point, there wasss no place to run, and asss the liquidssshock dragonsss approached the town, they dessstroyed everything in their path
You [story] shout: Asss tim, ssshocked of what isss happening to hisss city, charged into the army of liquidssshock dragonsss and threw hisss ssspear into one of the dragonsss eyesss, then ripping it out of the sssocket and imapled the beassst'sss heart
You [story] shout: But, the dragon had ssswiped tim in the chessst, ripping in him half
You [story] shout: asss Bassshablasssha sssaw the horrible happening of hisss comrade, he ran to the opposssite ssside of the wildernessss to the enemy cassstle
You [story] shout: asss he killed many of the royal guardsss of the cassstle, he went inssside, and sssaw the king and queen, ssshocked at hisss arrival
You [story] shout: Bassshablasssha threw hisss luminusss ssspear which piereced the king'sss heart and killed him
You [story] shout: around 50 enemy royal guardsss came and threw bassshablasssha in a dungeon
You [story] shout: 2 weeksss later, the royal guardsss of the enemy clan took the ssstarving and weak bassshablasssha to sssee hisss city, or the ruinsss to be exact
You [story] shout: Bassshablasssha could not even find the ssstrength to cry, and asss the sssoldiersss threw him near the entrence of the dessstroyed cassstle, they killed Bassshablasssha
You [story] shout: The dessstroyed ruinsss are now knowsss asss the Vesssimasss ruinsss, where naga zombiesss, mossst likely the royal guardsss of the old nagaraga clan had mossst likely been revived by the ssshock of the liquidssshock dragon, either from a bite or ssswipe
You [story] shout: the enemy clan isss now known asss the vesssimasss, ,which many playersss today fight the nagasss
You [story] shout: or come to sssee the city
You [story] shout: The end.
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Old 08-04-2010, 03:29 PM
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I enjoyed this story!

Good work....please post more =)
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Old 07-18-2011, 08:32 PM
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I enjoyed this story!

Good work....please post more =)
Sorry for the year long post, but thanks a lot! I will definitely make more of these improv's when wyvern comes back online.
 


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